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-title: "Uppy 0.28"
+title: "Uppy 0.28: A look behind the scenes"
 date: 2018-11-05
 author: renee
 image: "https://uppy.io/images/blog/0.28/dashboard-uploading.jpg"
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ published: true
 
 <img class="border"  src="/images/blog/0.28/dashboard-uploading.jpg">
 
-In `0.28`, we are introducing a new “Single Upload” mode, improving on Status Bar with a spinner and different pause/resume/cancel buttons, sharing progress on brining back unified locale packs and a Transloadit preset 🍁
+In `0.28`, we are introducing a new “Single Upload” mode, improving on the Status Bar plugin with a spinner and different pause/resume/cancel buttons, and we'll share some progress on bringing back unified locale packs and a Transloadit Preset 🍁
 
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@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ Speaking of the Dashboard, it now also shows more statuses in the title bar: “
 
 ## Status Bar improvements
 
-- ⚠️ **breaking** We’ve added separate options for hiding pause/resume and cancel buttons. So now there are several options for buttons: `hideUploadButton`, `hideRetryButton`, `hidePauseResumeButton` and `hideCancelButton`. These options can be passed from the Dashboard, if you are not using Status Bar separately (most common case). See the docs for more: https://uppy.io/docs/status-bar/.
+- ⚠️ **breaking** We’ve added separate options for hiding pause/resume and cancel buttons. So now there are several options for buttons: `hideUploadButton`, `hideRetryButton`, `hidePauseResumeButton` and `hideCancelButton`. These options can be passed from the Dashboard, if you are not using Status Bar separately (most common case). See the docs for more info: https://uppy.io/docs/status-bar/.
 - The Status Bar now features a spinner animation when upload is in progress.
-- Encoding (with the Transloadit plugin, for example) and uploading progress now get different colors, so it’s easier to tell what’s happening visually.
+- Encoding (with the Transloadit plugin, for example) and uploading progress now get different colors, so it’s easier to tell what’s happening, visually.
 
 <img class="border" style="border-top: 0;" src="/images/blog/0.28/status-bar-uploading.png">
 
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 })
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-The benefit to this is that there will be a central point of configuration for languages, so there could be language packs with strings for eg Czech at @uppy/lang-cz (or @uppy/langs/cz) that would be very easy to use.
+The benefit to this is that there will be a central point of configuration for languages, so there could be language packs with strings for eg Czech at @uppy/lang-cz (or @uppy/langs/cz) that would be very easy to contribute (or use).
 
 After Uppy 0.28.0 this functionality is technically possible, but we still need to update and publish locale packs for multiple languages.
 
@@ -84,17 +84,17 @@ This "preset" will provide three or so simple methods:
 
  - `transloadit.form()`, to enhance a form with existing file `<input>`s with Transloadit encoding capabilities, powered by Uppy's resilient uploading plugins
  - `transloadit.modal()`, to show a one-off modal Dashboard that uploads to Transloadit's encoding backend
- - `transloadit.upload()`, to simply upload files, so you can build your own UIs instead
+ - `transloadit.upload()`, to instruct Uppy to upload files, using your own UI instead
 
 Stay tuned!
 
 ## Other Cool Changes
 
-- @uppy/core: ⚠️ **breaking** remove `upload-cancel` event, `file-removed` should be enough, see #1069 for details
+- @uppy/core: ⚠️ **breaking** remove `upload-cancel` event, `file-removed` should be enough, see [#1069](https://github.com/transloadit/uppy/pull/1069) for details
 - @uppy/companion: ⚠️ **breaking** Migrated provider adapter to Companion: saves 5KB on the frontend, all heavy lifting moved to the server side
-- @uppy/companion: Removed an erroneous typescript dependency that added 40MB to the install size
-- @uppy/thumbnail-generator: You can now constrain thumbnail height, thanks to @richartkeil, see [#1096](https://github.com/transloadit/uppy/pull/1096) for documentation (we’ll are planning to add real Thumbnail Generator documentation soo, too!)
-- @uppy/webcam: Fix getting data from Webcam recording if mime type includes codec metadata (#1094 / @goto-bus-stop)
+- @uppy/companion: Removed an erroneous TypeScript dependency that added 40MB to the install size
+- @uppy/thumbnail-generator: You can now constrain thumbnail height, thanks to @richartkeil, see [#1096](https://github.com/transloadit/uppy/pull/1096) for documentation (we are planning to add real Thumbnail Generator documentation soon, too!)
+- @uppy/webcam: Fix getting data from Webcam recording if mime type includes codec metadata ([#1094](https://github.com/transloadit/uppy/pull/1094) / @goto-bus-stop)
 - meta: Added integration tests (in real browsers, thanks to Sauce Labs) for @uppy/url, @uppy/transloadit and @uppy/thumbnail-generator 🚀
 
 See [full changelog (0.28 and 0.27.x patches) for more](https://github.com/transloadit/uppy/blob/master/CHANGELOG.md#0280)